Tuesday, January 31, 2012
first roller coaster
Full metal, strapped in, adrenalin pumping and the only thing you hear is a fast paced clicks. Your scared and excited at the same time then click, click, click and nothing. Then all of a sudden swoosh!!! your at high speed going strait down and you fee like your gut is in you throat. up, down, up, down and around then you get to a straight away you don't know what is going on and your not stopping. Then you stop and your thrown forward and slammed back into your seat so fast you don’t know what happened.
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This is such a cool intro. I love how you started off describing the experience of a roller coaster, but wish you told me more about your fist time on one or were you writing about the first roller coaster ever? I was a little confused about that, but loved how you started this piece.
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